Your analysis of question 2, demonstrates a very basic understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts and this is because you have generalised all your points together, instead of commenting on one production at a time.
You have slightly considered the conventions of soul texts and you have started to justify your points on the choices and decisions that you carried out, but you need to ensure that you have related your points back to your texts, by including the appropriate images, to support the points that you have made.
Your analysis of question 2, demonstrates a very basic understanding of how your music video works alongside your ancillary texts and this is because you have generalised all your points together, instead of commenting on one production at a time.
ReplyDeleteYou have slightly considered the conventions of soul texts and you have started to justify your points on the choices and decisions that you carried out, but you need to ensure that you have related your points back to your texts, by including the appropriate images, to support the points that you have made.