We have annotated the lyrics by highlighting and making notes off of the parts in which we can incorporate narrative ideas into, as well as the parts in which we believe we can use specific cinematography and mise-en-scene for to portray the lyrics.
- 'I tell myself, you don't mean a thing' - When our artist is singing this line, we are going to have her singing into the mirror using a over the shoulder shot to represent her telling herself how she feels.
- 'But when you're not there' - We will have our artist laying in bed imagining her ex laying next to her, when she sings this line the male character will fade from the scene.
- 'I just crumble' - We could have our character/artist fall apart in the scene to convey how they are crumbling from the pain they are experiencing.
- 'Till I feel your touch' we could have our male and female character touch each other and make it positioned into the middle of the camera shot.
- 'Must have been a deadly kiss' - We would have our male and female character kiss to show how the kiss they share.
You have made a start in considering the hidden meanings of your chosen song and it is clear to see that you have considered a narrative for your production. However, the narrative needs to be explored in a lot more detail, by explaining what will be seen, the style of the production, explanation of how you will follow the soul conventions and how your production will appeal to your target audience.
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